10 thoughts on “Swahili Haiku

    1. Hakika. Ukiangalia historia ya haiku, ni ivo inafaa lakini wandishi wengi hawazingatii hayo. Saa zingine unaona ukienda na mfumo wa silabi 5
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      utaharibu labda ujumbe wa shairi lako, kwa hivyo una’twist kiasi. Ata mimi ni majaribio tu. Nashukuru kwa maoni yako. Uwe na wakati mwema ndugu!

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